Task 10 - Editing: "Snap, Snap, Bang" - 1st Draft and Feedback

Open ended question for the class:

1. What is the narrative?
2. Opinions on the black and white?
3. What do you think of the overall costume and setting?
4. Too corny? Too simple?
5. Are there any major issues with editing?
6. Is the story disjointed because of the editing?
7.  What do you think is the target audience?
8. Do you understand the basic premise of "The Game"
9. What can you learn from each of these characters?
10. Are there any technical aspects that don't work?

 Points for myself:

•  The short needs a clear introduction 
• Need to add sound effects and a soundtrack
• Some shots need to be rearranged to show a more cohesive narrative.