A new introduction was developed to come before the introduction that appeared in the drafts before because of the fact that I wanted to create more of a backstory for the character of Contestant 4, and put more emphasis on the fact that he's just an average person - Not really the social outcast, but doesn't really fit in majorly with one particular group of people. In creating this new beginning I had to slightly adjust the scene after that to make sure it flowed more smoothly in conjunction with the new introduction.
The music I had created before I began writing the script is beginning to be integrated into the script just so I know where I should be editing it into the product, in in the editing process, and to aid with how the scene is developed as I continue to edit it.
I have also considered completely removing the character of Contestant 4 as they don't necessarily add anything to the narrative, due to the fact that they are such a blank character. Also, logistically, cutting the cast down to 3 characters would be very beneficial as a 4th member was planned to appear in that role but unfortunately dropped out. In doing this, I would replace Contestant 2's dialogue and actions, with that of Contestant 1's dialogue in his place.
No comments:
Post a Comment