I like the ideas for the documentary as often the insight comes from
someone of your age exploring areas that are hidden from an older generations
perspective.
The way that you presented hinted at a lack of preparation but in fact
you were well prepared and have a draft of a script and a storyboard showing that
thought has gone into this work. You
style of presentation did not convince and perhaps provides a false impression.
I was not sure what medium you planned to work in from your explanation and the
idea seemed vague.
Through questioning it was revealed that there was a deal of planning
and the genesis of your idea offers mileage for exploration. It seems like a Russian Roulette Fight club
in a short film. Intriguing.
Targets
Document your research into these teen trends on your web-log to show research.
Ensure all research and planning is complete and detailed
Upload your storyboard and script to your web-log
The documentary may work if you find the narrative does not work.
Be disciplined about schedules and deadlines.
The concept behind the documentary will be kept and developed, but not with as much focus as the main media product. The script and storyboard are being developed at the same time and they should be completed by next week, which will then allow me to start shooting the product.
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